Wednesday, November 27, 2013

The Elements Prologue


Prologue

 
“Be careful with that, foolish child!”

Cato winced and then glanced momentarily at his father before he continued. “The stone appears to be encoded…if I could just…” he twisted the top, but a little too quickly. The intricate engravings that snaked around and up the stoned container began to glow a brilliant blue and Cato’s father knew exactly what that meant. Cato also knew…it meant he had failed. He could feel his father’s rage seeping through the air, coating him and his siblings around him with a blanket of fury.

The blue mist seemed to whip and curl out of the celestial stone that was once its home. He tried to grab at it, but knew there was no use. If the element was extracted incorrectly, it would escape and be given a new and unknown structure to inhabit. That structure was always extremely difficult to locate. In fact, it had taken over one hundred years to find the one he just screwed up.

“Cato, just go!” his brother called to him. “Begin your search again and do not return until you have possession of the element.”

Cato hated that his father favored his oldest brother over him. It was as if he couldn’t do anything right. He gave a quick bow of his head and took off, trying to get away from his father as quickly as possible. “I will not fail you father.” It was the last thing he said before disappearing into the darkness.

“You just did,” his father growled in anger as he began to pace, fuming more and more with each step he took. After coming to an abrupt halt with his wife at his side, he turned to his remaining six children. Sage began to sit at her throne, gathering her burgundy gown and sweeping it to the side with all the grace of a queen, before settling in the onyx chair. She was, hands down, the only thing that could calm the king in any way. Their father acknowledged her with a glance and then turned his attention back to his children. “Your brother has failed me,” he began, his tone harsh and unforgiving.

“This is a very delicate and tedious process my love,” their mother interjected. She never stopped giving her opinion, no matter how intimidating their father was, he didn’t seem to faze her the same way he did everyone else. “Cato is a good son, he does what you ask of him and I will not have your unrealistic expectations be a reason for severe punishment.” By severe punishment, she meant the whip of fire. It was just what the name implied.   

“Woman!” He turned to her slowly and their eyes met. She held his stare and did not relent in her gaze. She was the only one that could do that as well. His returning glare was always menacing and cold. It would make anyone else want to hide inside themselves and disappear. “These children of ours need to understand all that I-”

“Hush now!” She stood to her feet and their father’s lips pressed into a thin line as he glared at his wife. “This is ridiculous. The longer you keep them here, the longer it will take them to find the rest of the elements again. If the pretty little containers are not here, how can you destroy them, hmm?”

“You speak too boldly.” He barked.

“Too boldly? Ha!” The Queen waved her hand in the air as if she were shooing a fly away. She made her way back to her husband’s side to address their children together. Her raven black hair looked like blackened flames surrounding her delicate looking face. She walked with such grace it was as if she were floating, her gown rippling like liquid against the stone floor beneath her.

The remaining six children took a knee in the presence of their mother and father standing together before them. Their mother had full lips, the color of a deep red rose and her cat-like eyes had a smoldering black look to them that intimidated the strongest of men. She looked at her husband fiercely and everyone knew she would have the final say today. “I say what I want, when I want my love.” She spoke calmly and tilted her head to the side watching her husband struggle to harness his tongue. “I will not be controlled by you or any other…it is why I am your queen, is it not?” She lifted her chin and waited for a response.

“But we are stuck here…bound to this land until they,” he thrust his hand out gesturing towards their children, “decide to do what is asked of them.” They could all hear his struggle in maintaining control of himself.

“And they will.”

Their father rolled his eyes, an inherent trait. “How many opportunities do they need to fail me? I tell them, find the element, bring me the element and I will destroy it.” His voice began to gradually elevate. “I am thorough when I explain the process and they all know that if the celestial containers which preserve the elements are not…opened correctly, the element itself escapes to some other place and I must begin at square one again! I should have done it myself. I told you, let me do it and you insisted they learn something by doing it themselves, well look where that has gotten us!”

“Not so they would learn. You know that they must be the ones to destroy the element they find my love. You cannot do it for any of them, no matter how much you may want to.”

“But I will succeed!”

“Impossible!” Both of their onyx colored eyes flashed with flames of anger.

“Their lack of completion is unacceptable; maybe they need a better reason to renew their determination to complete their task at hand!”

Their mother didn’t even flinch, but she turned her attention to them and again spoke calmly. “Did you hear that my children?” They each began to nod slowly. “Your father and I are very disappointed. You have all been searching for a very long time and what do we have to show for it my loves? All of the elements, yet again, out there waiting to be destroyed during the Annular eclipse…now I understand when you are here, you are not there,” she pointed towards outside. “I also know if you are not out there, you are not able to search, the way we so desperately need you to…do you understand?”

“Yes mother,” they called out in unison.

“Now then, it has taken a very long time for this entire search-and-destroy mission and I am growing tired of your father not having what he wants. I can only protect you from his wrath for so long…not only is this powerful being your father, but he is also king, you all have a duty to please both.”

They each began to rise slowly to their feet in anticipation of the lecture coming to a close. “Go now my children-locate the elements so that we may destroy them and expand our kingdom to its rightful size…bigger, than anyone else’s. Do not disappoint me.” A wicked grin curled their mother’s lips upward and they bowed obediently to her before leaving to search their territories tirelessly until they could bring her what she wanted.

“It will be done,” they heard her saying to their father in the distance. The oldest glanced back at them over his shoulder, in time to see his father reward her with a lustful kiss. He averted his eyes forward and ran with the others until they were out of sight.

 

 

Thursday, June 13, 2013

Do you love reading? A couople of disturbing facts along with a plea for Beta Readers! :-D

Hello virtual world! I am trying to get as many Beta readers as possible for my YA Fictional novel. I need your feedback and support here:-) With the way the digital era seems to be sweeping across the world, young minds are being consumed with the alternate worlds that video games supply, leaving the imagination department up to the game creators. While gaming is wonderfully entertaining and texting is a fast way of messaging, without reading our youth is doomed to become more illiterate than the generations before them.
Many authors write for several different reasons, I write to put the imagination ball back into the courts of our youth and young adults. Our minds-not game controllers-are the most capable of  transporting us from reality to wherever we want to go. I aim to put the power of imagination and renovation back into the hands of every generation who's been consumed. Yes, just by writing a book;-) That's how powerful a tool I believe reading to be. I write not to help you escape to a different world, but to push you to create a new one.    
I would love to know what everyone thinks of my debut novel. I sincerely appreciate all of your time and input guys-thank you!:-D
Thank you for your support everyone!
~Kristen


Here's a couple of interesting facts I got from an article written by Stuart Wolpert in 2009, (http://newsroom.ucla.edu/portal/ucla/is-technology-producing-a-decline-79127.aspx).

According to research by Patricia Greenfield, UCLA distinguished professor of psychology and director of the Children's Digital Media Center, Los Angeles,

"Studies show that reading develops imagination, induction, reflection and critical thinking, as well as vocabulary," Greenfield said. "Reading for pleasure is the key to developing these skills. Students today have more visual literacy and less print literacy. Many students do not read for pleasure and have not for decades."

She continues on to say "Reading for pleasure, which has declined among young people in recent decades, enhances thinking and engages the imagination in a way that visual media such as video games and television do not," Greenfield said.

Monday, May 13, 2013

To be published or to self publish...Your thoughts and why?

Face rejection to possibly persevere via self publishing...when you're new to the game, what should an author do?
I would love to hear from the perspective of those who have taken this journey themselves. Which direction did you take and why?

Saturday, May 11, 2013

Writing with accents-any suggestions?!

Hello all!
A question for the masses here, I am working on another novel and would like some of my characters to have accents.
Any suggestions on where I can find good advice on Australian, British, African or Irish (Dublin area) accents? Writing a book is a long process and I was hoping for some time saving suggestions for this part of it from my fellow readers and writers:-) Thanks in advance for any tips!

Friday, May 10, 2013

My first Blog!


Hello, my name is Kristen and this is my first blog ever, so I'm really excited to enter the blogger's world! I know there are tons of different types of blogs out there, I would just like mine to be the type that gets others to read my material and comment on it. I started this blog mostly, to get a large group of Beta readers for my first novel ever, The Elements: Pride. I would love to make a difference in the direction that reading books has taken. Writing a good one would be a step in that direction:-)
 
The trailer above was a project I did for the wonderfully talented author Anna Banks. I'm proud of myself because it's the first trailer I've ever made, so I posted it;-) Oh and yes, I am aware that I used almost all clips from the CW's Vampire Diaries. I thought there were a lot of characters that fit Anna Banks book, Of Triton:-)
Anyhoo, if you have  a second or sixty would you mind leaving your opinions as to whether or not you think this is a good way to attract Beta readers? I wrote a little cheer for you guys....
 
A very quick little poem for Beta Readers:
 
Beta readers, you're the best
put my writing to the test,
like it, hate it, up to you
leave a comment, then you're through!
(This would really help me too;-)
 
 
So whado'ya say guys?
 
 
 
P.S I also started another blog to try and attract more readers
and my website is